xD I you get more coments from me you're gonna think i'm spamming!
Well I'm not!
I think you're good, I like your skills. However I think you should work a little on your neatness. (Remember my advice is honest! Dun take it wrong! >.<
Your style is nice, you archieve some really nice facial expressions and poses. I just think you should work a lil more on your lining, a smooth outline and such. Some random lines to keep the effect of anguish (I love that)
And maybe you should consider to display this at the ZADR club on DA ^^ That should give you a better audience.
I'm watching you, I like your work
-- LOVE is the only way ~ Icon base made by ~malicu
yay! you like my work, and yes actually they invited me so i hope to join soon! and i know its not a complaint just some helpfull advice XD i get the same advice a lot, see i do the whole work in pen and i do it very fast!( wish you could see XD its so much fun to make somone go wow) So somtimes it turns out sloppy like that. But just for you ill try and make it neater! it might take a bit longer though ^^ thank you soooo much for the comment it means a lot to me!
Are you that fast? That should be amazing to see! I'm sure you're very skilled!
And yeah, in order to keep a comic on the long run (i mean until the storyline it's all out) you need to keep the reader's interest. a good way to do so is the epic panels *-* you're not very far away, you just need some patience.
^^ Glad to see the ZADR club on your signature!
-- LOVE is the only way ~ Icon base made by ~malicu
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Well I'm not!
I think you're good, I like your skills. However I think you should work a little on your neatness. (Remember my advice is honest! Dun take it wrong! >.<
Your style is nice, you archieve some really nice facial expressions and poses. I just think you should work a lil more on your lining, a smooth outline and such. Some random lines to keep the effect of anguish (I love that)
And maybe you should consider to display this at the ZADR club on DA ^^ That should give you a better audience.
I'm watching you, I like your work
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Icon base made by ~malicu
and i know its not a complaint just some helpfull advice XD i get the same advice a lot, see i do the whole work in pen and i do it very fast!( wish you could see XD its so much fun to make somone go wow)
So somtimes it turns out sloppy like that. But just for you ill try and make it neater! it might take a bit longer though ^^
thank you soooo much for the comment it means a lot to me!
--
\"Keep Moving Foward\"
Walt Disney
*Z-A-D-R
And yeah, in order to keep a comic on the long run (i mean until the storyline it's all out) you need to keep the reader's interest. a good way to do so is the epic panels *-* you're not very far away, you just need some patience.
^^ Glad to see the ZADR club on your signature!
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Icon base made by ~malicu
--
\"Keep Moving Foward\"
Walt Disney
*Z-A-D-R
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Icon base made by ~malicu
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